Im Starting to work on the second chapter today, it will introduce my character and three maybe five other characters. Anyway, so was up guys? anything happening?

For your amusement ive provided a small intro to another story i want to work on. This one i made off the top of my head for a friend of mine, anyway its anime influenced and its short, but plz still tell me if theres things i need to work on.

Demon Dog
By
Barabas Aka Agito

It was a normal school day for Agito Biankie, he got dressed, brushed his teeth and ate breakfast, but what Agito didn't know was that he was in for more than just an average day of school....
So as Agito was walking to school he looked in an alleyway and saw a young white dog lying in a puddle. As Agito went to investigate he noticed the animal stir, but after a closer examination he saw that it was covered in cuts and scrapes. Agito thought for a minute then decided he would help the animal since he still had plenty of time to make it to school. So he reached down and started to bandage the animal. During which it awoke with a snarl and bit at Agito, but withdrawled after noticing he was just trying to help. While bandaging the dog, he got to notice a strange symbol on its neck and the fact that the dog has blood red eyes, which Agito just claimed it was a genetic defect, but time went on and Agito finally finished helping the dog. The dog stared at Agito, almost as it was sizing him up, or better yet trying to say thanks. Agito stood back up and was walking out of the alleyway when out of the corner of his eye he noticed the dog walking behind him. He spone around and was going to say stay but noticed the dog had vanished. Agito thought about the vanishing for a moment then blamed it on stress, then headed for school.

After arriving at school Agito spotted some of his friends.
"Hey Agito! Where've you been man? Your like 20 minutes later than usual?"
*Sighs*"I was held up Tentou, there was a beat up dog in an alleyway so I stopped to help it."
*Laughs*"man since when have you ever been a dog person, and besides why did you care about some beat up dog anyway?"
*Stares out a window*"I don't know, for some reason i just felt compelled to help him.*looks back at Tentou* There was something strange about the dog too."
*Blinks*"what like rabies strange or missing a leg?"
*Shakes head*"Well something like that, he seemed fine health wise, other than the cuts and stuff, but he had a strange symbol on his neck and his eyes were blood red."
*Rolls eyes*"Huh, sounds like a strange dog to me---"
WHACK!*Tentou jumps*
"Tentou, may i remind you and Agito that class has started."
*Looks down and says unanimously*"yes Ms.Orikami."

As class continued Agito kept thinking back about the dog and how it disappeared like it did.
WHACK*Agito looks up casually*"Sorry Ms.Orikami, it wont happen again."
"See that it doesn't Mr.Wanijima.*turns back to chalkboard*Now class if you focus on the odd integer...*voice starts to fade as Agito goes back to thinking about the dog*
RRRRRRRRRRIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNN NNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG
"Alright class now make sure you do page 33, questions 4-40 in your textbooks, is that clear?"
"Yes Ms.Orikami"
As the students file out Agito is slowly picking up his stuff.
*Ms.Orikami walks over*"Agito, may i have a word?"
*Bows head*"Of course Ms.Orikami"
*returns the gesture*"Agito, may i remind you that its only been three weeks since the start of school and you're already starting to doze off. I hope you know that if you keep this up you are bound to fail my class."
*hangs head*"Yes Ms.Orikami, it wont happen again."
*pats on shoulder*"That's good, because i expect great things from you Agito."
"Yes Ms.Orikami."*picks up books and heads towards the school entrance*
As Agito is walking he notices a group of girls gathered around something.
"OH ISNT HE SO CUTE!!!"
"OH I KNOW HES JUST AHHH!!!"
"I WISH I KNEW WHO HE BELONGED TO."
As Agito got closer he was able to look through a gap of girls and see the white dog he had helped earlier. As he looked the dog finally looked up past the girls and stared at Agito with a fierce intensity.
"Um...excuse me?"*Girl taps Agito on the shoulder*"Is this dog yours?"
*Startled and looks over*"well no, i just helped him out when he was hurt."
"Awww that's so sweet, but you know, now he owes you something. He's probably bound to follow you around like this until he pays you back."
"Wait what? Dogs don't do that..."
"Dogs, cats heck even birds who owe a debt usually end up helping the person that they owe."
*Sighs*"I'm out of here."*Starts to walk off*

As Agito walks off he notices that hes never seen that girl at school before. He looks back to see if the girl is still there, but notices instead the dog trotting behind him.*vain appears on the side of his head*"Listen you cant keep following me around like this, i dont need a dog."
The dog just sat there with his usual serious look about him.
*vain subsides*"ughh, fine you can come with me, but the first time you leave a mess in my parents house your out. Alright?"
The dog for a second almost looked like it nodded.
*surprised*"wha....uh nvm,just come on, i got to be home soon."

As Agito arrived at his house, he opened the door slowly and yelled, "Is anyone home?"
The house was silent for all but the refrigerator and the a/c unit.
"Figures, they're never home."
Agito pushes the door all the way open and walks in. He also makes sure the dog gets in before closing the door.
*Looks down at the dog*"well welcome to my welcoming abode."
The dog stared at Agito for a min before trotting off and searching the rest of the house.
"Great ill just be upstairs, i got to finish my homework."
As Agito makes his way up the stairs he hears the soft sound made by the dog as it's paws hit the carpeted stairs.
"heh"

sorry about the spacing nothing i can do about it,anyway plz give me suggestions, any and all are welcome and appriciated.